Monday, April 13, 2009

hands

hands are great
strong or weak
machines wouldnt work
without our hands
if you try to swim
and there you drawn
if means your dumb
but if you use your hands to swim
theres a chance that
you survive, if you survive
it means your hands safe your life
hands can be a bad thing
it can steal and kill
but if you control
the movement of your hands
hands can be a really good thing
and if you think
hands are just useless part of your body
your the dumbmest person in the world
and all of this true

11 comments:

  1. HEHEHE DUMB LOL
    GOOD POEM MICHAEL

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  2. NiCE POEM MiCHAEl =]

    -hONEyCOMBz*

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  3. i like it micahel good details on why we need hands

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  4. How about you do you really love your hands?? :]]

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  5. nice peom
    but u lost me at the end
    what did u mean???

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  6. hahaha..funny.but nice!
    SMILEYBABEY♥

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  7. O wow lol nice poem about hands good details Michale!!
    Ernie

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  9. Nancy I think what he was trying to say is that hands ARE useful. If you don't think they're useful, then you're dumb. I don't know how to make it easier for you to understand..

    Anyway, I like your ending Michael.

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