My name is Michael, it was the first day of June when my grandfather toke a picture when we were having our breakfast. I'm the boy in the right side with a red and white shirt. I really don't want to eat because I'm still sleepy and want to go back in my bed. Bernie my older brother is the one in the middle and the one that is so hungry. My older sister, Karen is all the way to the left and she wants to feed our horse that we named Julian. My grandmother is the one who bake the cake but it turn out to a pie.
My grandmother calls my mother Alexia and shes the one who is feeding our horse. My father, David looks so weird in this picture, he just finish eating and about to go outside and feed the other animals. The dog in the picture is Pedro, actually I'm the one who give the name Pedro for him. Pedro our dog is hungry that time too and my mom feed the our horse Julian first. In the picture Pedro look so jealous about it.
My grandmother calls my mother Alexia and shes the one who is feeding our horse. My father, David looks so weird in this picture, he just finish eating and about to go outside and feed the other animals. The dog in the picture is Pedro, actually I'm the one who give the name Pedro for him. Pedro our dog is hungry that time too and my mom feed the our horse Julian first. In the picture Pedro look so jealous about it.
After that breakfast, me and my older brother went outside to play. Pedro our dog was their too, while our mother was watching us together with my sister. I ask my father if i can ride Julian in the back and he said sure but I'll be on your side. When i was riding Julian in the back i feel so nervous because what if he go crazy and run so fast. I spent my whole day in the back of our horse Julian and with Pedro our dog in the side of us.
nice story i like it really good kep up the good work!!!!
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nice story michael i like how you put the names LOLz
ReplyDeleteNICE JOB keep it up
haha michael i like the story..
ReplyDeletecool names for the animals and the people.ha.
i like it any way its very descripitve
good one michael especially the names
ReplyDeletehahaha Nice story Michael I like your story it's cool and kind of funny keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteFunny story!
ReplyDeletenice story michael
ReplyDeleteits a funny story
good work!
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wow good one michale i liked it lolzzz
ReplyDeleteit is funny keep uo the good
work!!!
good job michael
ReplyDeleteit was funny and its kool im the dad
yeah its kool david cuz ur dad and alexia is the mom lolz....^_^
ReplyDeleteI like how you used some names of our classmates. =D
ReplyDeleteI found a spelling mistake. "toke"
nicee story michael! :D
ReplyDelete-ALLy
hahahaha I like da names!!! u included our friends :)
ReplyDeletegreat story!!
ReplyDeletei love the names