Thursday, March 19, 2009

Her Mysterious Death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances and i was assigned to the case. I am a detective for almost 5 years and nothing special and exciting that happen in my job. It was 4 something in the afternoon, I was chilling on the beautiful white sand of Miami Florida looking at the plain blue sky thinking of giving up my boring job and find another exciting job. I was about to close my eyes, my phone ring... It was a client, she name her self Ally. She needs help hoping that i can help her find out who killed her very long close friend that she name Nancy. I'm looking for excitement, so i said yeah sure but can we talk in personal so you can tell me more about what happen.
Maria leave all the way to Chicago Illinois, i pack my bag and went straight to Illinois. All they thought, her friend Dianna commit a suicide but Dianna can't find any reason that her friend will commit a suicide. August 24, 1994 nine o'clock in the evening Dianna and her friends were in a party at Dianna's house. About 9:30 pm in that day Dianna told Maria that she's just going to get something upstairs. It's almost 10:30 in the evening, Dianna still not back so Maria decides to go upstairs and check Dianna. When Maria open Dianna's door she found Dianna hanging with her eyes open. Maria screams and all her friends are running to check what happen. I ask Maria if who are the people in the house that time. She name them Michael, Bernie, Pedro, Karen, Zuly, Eli, David and herself.
Dianna's house still in investigation, i went to the house and check the body Dianna and take DNA and finger print and found out that Michael, Bernie and Pedro has their finger print in the body of Dianna so i think one of them killed Dianna or three of them. Maria that maybe because they get the body of Dianna and put it down. After one day of examining the body of Dianna i found nothing.
It was the middle of the night and I'm the only person left on the house, I sit to Dianna's bed, thinking if Dianna really commit a suicide, until when i saw the rope in the floor and thinking of getting a finger print of it. I found one finger print and hear something. It is like there is someone other than me at the house, I look around and around but didn't see anything. I post a second expecting to hear something............ I feel something that someone is in my back, i turn around and saw a guy with a mask in his face, and was holding a packet knife. Seconds later he start walking toward me, i start running and don't know where to go because i don't know the house. He still chancing me, sadently i slip BOOM! his about to stab BooM! something shouts, the guy fell down and i saw Maria at the back. I pull the mask and ask Maria "do you know him". She said "yeah" he is David. The finger print in the rope was the same finger print that David has. I solved the mystery with the help of Maria. The end.

5 comments:

  1. NICEEE STORY IT WAS AMAZING BUT U SHOUD OF PUT ME IN THE STORY LOL..
    NICE STORY

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  2. That was good i thought it was either bernie, michale or pedro who killed her. You got me in this story good one.

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  3. I like your story michael thanks for adding me...lol I agree with bernie. It could of been bernie, michael,or pedro

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  4. nice stroy but i think it could use more exsitement.
    why i'm a dead girl???

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